Wednesday, September 7, 2011

walt use ajectives and metaphors

It was the final game my heart was pumping I was as hot as lava what could happen?I felt like melting ice cube and my whole country was counting on me .I would rather be a melted ice cube because I was sick to the stomach and shivering to the bone .
by rachel

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