Wednesday, September 7, 2011

WALT: use adjectives and metaphors

It was the FINAL game. The whole contruy was depending on us "Aussie vs kiwis" said the coach. I was sweating like a melting ice cube. I've never been so nervous in my life! But my mate Conrad was all goods because he's played the Ausies heaps of times.
By Ethan

1 comment:

  1. I like the use of adjective Ethan, and the metaphor about the ice cube is very clever.

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