Wednesday, September 7, 2011

WALT: Use adjectives and metaphors

It was the final game against Australia.I was sweatting like an icecream in the hot sun. There were butterflys jumping around in my tummy and flying out of my stomach. I felt as nervous as if I was jumping off the twin towers.
By Danielle
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  1. Miss DaltonSeptember 13, 2011 at 3:53 PM

    I like the way you have used real things to describe your feelings Danielle.

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