Wednesday, September 7, 2011

WALT: use adjectives and metaphors

It was the final game. I could feel my heat pounding as it was trying to jump out of my chest. Sitting on the stool with all my team mates


by Paige
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  1. Miss DaltonSeptember 13, 2011 at 3:54 PM

    A good start to the story Paige, choosing some exciting vocabulary.

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