Wednesday, September 7, 2011

walt adjectives and metaphors.

It was the final game. It was as cold as antartica and I was shaking like jelly that had just got thrown on a plate. I looked around the sharp corner seeing millon's of people cheering.
By Mel
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  1. Miss DaltonSeptember 13, 2011 at 3:51 PM

    Great Job Mel. This has put a very clear picture in my mind, I wanted to read more.

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